Review for Lost

Lost

(#) BJH 2007-05-03

Very nice start. I liked the almost stream of consciousness nature of the monologue. It got a bit rough at parts, like how Hedwig's fate seemed forced somehow, but in general I liked it and I am looking forward to seeing where this story goes. With just this bit we have no hint of the eventual plot.

Will the Wizarding World once again need Harry to do their dirty work? Will they plead and beg his forgiveness until he acquiesce? Or will he be forced to intercede by either the "good guys" or the bad threatening his family?

BJH