I loved it.
I love Patrick stories, and this one is amazing.
Don't give up just because no one is reviewing.
No one reviews my stories and I still post them.
So please don't give up.
Update soon.
Author's response
I am soo incredibly shocked and happy this story is being so well received. It is amazing. Thank you for reviewing. I tend not to write Patrick stories. Figuring he is one of the most beloved subject matters, Most of my stories have Joe as the main character and a few it is Pete.
It has been so hard to write new stories when no one reviews. I was on this site months ago and when i would post instantly people would review and it was amazing. I was gone for months and now i feel like eithe my writing has decreased in value or no one cares enough.
I went on rambling i;m sorry. Thank you soo much for reviewing and like you told me. Don't give up.