I loved it. Of course I love Patrick stories. Don't get discouraged over lack of reviews. Hope you turn this into a longer story. If not it was great. Even made me tear up. :)
Author's response
Aww i did not mean to cause any tears!! I'm sorry. Thank you for the support though and thank you for reading and reviewing. People keep asking for this to be longer and so i am contemplating what I could do. Thank you again.