wow...that was really insightful. metarates anyways, i love how you expanded a bit on her, i always did think of her as 'that girl on the side who's a whore' but now, i think there's a little more volume to her character. and i'm going to be so sad if this ends soon! (well it's going to end anyways but still lol) i read his birthday wish, and that was fabulous. i wish you would write this chapter in more of a little paragraph format, and not sentence-space-sentence-space, etc. but other than that, i really really love this.
keep it up, cuz i'll be waiting right here!
xoxo-nat.