Ahhh! Im the first one to review! And I think you just posted it too! I thought I was the only one who was up all night!
Anyway this was your best chapter so far! I mean that! I absolutely loved it! The dialog, the plot, how you blended what they were saying in with what they were doing! I loved it. I hate when its just straight dialog cause its like what are they just standing there talking! Ha! But this was great. I was kinda hoping Mikey would drink the chemicals in a way though I knew he wouldnt... It wasnt too cheesy either... very believable... now I took so long writing this I may not be first review anymore.
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Author's response
oh wow thanks!! I think it's one of the greatest compliments I EVER received!. Mikey is a fucking sissy hahaha but that's why I like him so much.
Anyway, thanks a LOT for the review, it really means a lot to me when people take the time to read and comment on this story.
and just for the record, your review was the first :) I don't know why but some of the people that always reviewed don't do it anymore, hopefully they don't think the story is a complete shit now..but oh well you can't please everybody no matter how much you would like too..I'm happy you still like it!!!!