heyy,waves i just read like the whooole thingie from the veeery beginnin. and i hit myself for not noticing this before.
i liike this muchly.noddity-nod i love the way you write what they're saying, and add some of her thoughts in there. they're hilarious.smiles at the memory and its nice that its not alll about her&Gee now that they're together( i haaate when that happens), like i mean here you wrote about her and Mikey, which was cool. hopes that makes any sense ^___^ so yes, this is a good one. keep it comiiing, yes? ^____^
Author's response
i'll defenetly keep it coming.
i hate it too when the story becomes just about the girl and gee/ray/bob/frankie/mikey, so i try to throw different stuff in it to spice it up a bit.
hope you'll countinue to read and review me!!! huge wave