for something set in an alternate universe, this story just sounds so REAL. there needs to be a lot more pete/patrick slash fics - scratch that, there needs to be a lot more people like you writing them. please please please continue this (of course, more smut would be nice; fall out boy really IS so easy to slash!) and please please please consider writing a different series when it's over. (i actually joined ficwad so i could review this).
Author's response
Thank you very much! I have a vision in mind for the end of this, which is a good thing. As for more Patrick/Pete, I think I can handle that eventually. Thank you again.