jon is so sweet! I would just like to note two things.
1) i find it incredible that you can write a wonderful brendon AND a wonderful jon, but have their characters defined. Brendon seems more..hyper active and sex-needy, and Jon is the sort of guy who would give you a foot rub after a bad day. so awesome
2) i laughed so hard throughout the whole Pete thing. loved how you threw him into the story. loved how HE was the one dragging jon around shopping. just brilliant.
Keep writting!
Love,
Lifey