"Yep, this is my big brother Gerard." Mikey said slipping a long slender arm around the slightly chubby man with long messy black hair and vacant bloodshot eyes that stood in front of Scarlet
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i like how you described gerard realistically instead of all like, 'his body was amazing' even though everyone knows he really was chubby back in the day. lol.
you made this story very real by describing him by how he actually was.
nice job.