I haven'y reviewed for your story before...but after reading you note on the bottom i thought now would be a great time to start. I'm absolutely in love with this story and would wait weeks in between chapters if i had to. One of the reasons i love this story is how you wrote Patrick. He reminds me of a friend of mine, Eli, who has always reminded me of Patrick. Eli's got the mannerisms, looks and even the glasses. So it makes it extremely realistic to me. And that, in my humble opinion, is what makes the best stories! Keep up the good work and dont let those others get you down.