I love stories that are unplanned. I think it gives you more freedom when each chapter takes on its own life.
I like how they're both trying not to upset the other, but they're both too emotionally invested to just shut up and walk away. I think anyone can relate to that.
Still loving this.
Author's response
I like to have a little idea of where I am going, with this one i do see potential with it being completely unplanned. I am trying to come up with a really complete story. With that, i also don't know how long this story will be. Anyway, thank you for reading it and for loving it. That means a lot to me, to know other people like this story when even I can find so many flaws. I want Patrick and Michele's interaction to be as "real" as possible, when you fight with someone you love you can't help but be so emotionally involved to not get angry, or fustrated. Even after a break-up it doesn't mean you stop loving them.