It seems to me that people always jump into Wolfram's infatuation for Yuuri and that's all they see. Due to this, Wolf come out as a very one dimensional character. I like this fic for the fact that it goes beyond that. You bring out many issues that exist within the series itself and address them in a very realistic manner. You've gone beyond just what everyone applies to being who Wolfram is and I think you've added more to it. I'm impressed.
There are a few grammatical and stylistic issues that pop up, but nothing too serious.
I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks very much for sharing.