Review for Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar

Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar

(#) hayeth 2007-05-19

Yes I know this chapter is crap compared to the rest of the story, but it was needed to help move the story forward. Again I apologize for the poor update

Author's response

One more thing. If you give a chapter of my story a bad rating like illiterate, be kind enough to post what needs fixing so I can fix it. You obviously had time to rate that it as bad Im sure you have time to tell me why.