Review for Broken Down On Memory Lane

Broken Down On Memory Lane

(#) Melim 2007-05-20

Damn Alex, there are no words. That was amazing. Everything was soo good and dramatic and emotional. Reading that email, I was expecting something bad, but this came out really refreshing. Even though we planned all out of this out, I never expected it to come out like this. Damn you for making me emotionally attached to your characters. And so the story now begins...

And Mussolini came out acting more like Sebastian than himself, just fyi.

Author's response

seriously i was awake at three in the morning hating this chapter because i wasn't sure about the last sentence. but i guess it turned out ok.
and hey i combined both the fish, Sebastian's characteristics with Mussolini's name - so yay me. lol.
it makes me happy that you are now emotionally attached to my characters, lol
it makes me smile like this -> :D

and yes,
now is really when the story begins

xxo.