... Wow.
This is very... uh, my vocabulary is failing. O_O You managed to... capture, in the individual segments, a little of what makes each of the characters THEMSELVES. And in such an original way, and the way you wove in the death note with who Weiss IS is just amazing.
I have literally nothing negitive to say. The little snippets of each soul you managed to capture... and the... and... and... wow.