I like your story so far!
Your meeting with the goblin chieftain was good. I love the transportation ring.
I can't wait for good ole tom to find out about his son... makes me wonder if he will actually find morals and grow a conscious.
The meeting with the girls family will be good..
The ritual for the Black Family too.. I like the idea of Sirius arranging for the adoption.
Where are you going with Remus? Is he going to side completely with dumbledore? or be more in Harry's corner and one of his first recruits?
I hope for the later as I really like the character of Remus..\
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