Review for The Magical School of MogenHeld

The Magical School of MogenHeld

(#) AberforthsAvatar 2007-05-29

The concept described in your summary looked interesting. Unfortunately your grammar is so poor that I can't struggle through this. Verb tenses, use of the wrong homonym, and capitalization errors are just the start. Please find some one to help you with this. English is a precision tool, not a blunt instrument.