Miss Katy. You are killing me with this anticipation. I love that you're building to the moment, but I just can't wait any longer. OK, I'll wait a couple more chapters, then I'm putting my foot down.
I liked how you incorporated the children more. Up until now, they were kind of a footnote. But you gave us a little peek of what they're really like and how Shay's actions affect them. And I especially like how patient Shay and Patrick are with Aimee and her stammering. And Rory's little tantrum. Very lifelike. I'd give you a point, but FicWad doesn't want you taking them all.