Review for Pirates Will be Pirates

Pirates Will be Pirates

(#) Ithilwen 2007-06-04

You're missing a question mark here and there and "Be" gets caps in title-style, but overall it seems to come through.

Jack's impressions are most chortleworthy. Very nice after a day at work.

"Whatnot" is one word.

It's usually spelled, "Yeah." "Yea" is pronounced "yay" and is used in formal things like "Yea though I walk through the valley of death."

"Pretty nice" doesn't sould too Willish to my ears.

I can't really buy Jack allowing Will to blast the crud out of the Pearl right after he'd gotten it back, but it's worth a little "huh" at the end of the story to get that conversation. Funny.