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Elementary Calculations
(#) userid 2008-06-16
How many times will Harry get lost trying to find help for snape?
Figure just long enough for snape to be out of action for a few days should be fun. Harry is a first year on his second day so its easy for him to get lost.Elementary Calculations
(#) comp_wiz101 2008-06-16
Great chapter. I also liked the title. It really made me read it and say "That's a lot of pressure"... which really makes it perfect for this chapter.Elementary Calculations
(#) alec_potter 2008-06-17
Bloody fantastic....tooo good. Really loved the what happened to snape. But he is worse then a slimy snape...harry will def have much trouble ahead of him.
Am feeling very sorry for hermione, hope you can resort her in future. But i don't think you have that in mind. But a great chapter never the less.Elementary Calculations
(#) bloody-dawn 2008-06-17
Lol he almost seemes like Kabuto from Naruto with the glasses and creepy smile and knowledge of human anatomy.Elementary Calculations
(#) DrT 2008-06-17
Interesting. At least Snape won't mistake Harry for james any more!Elementary Calculations
(#) lycus 2008-06-17
Well that was a great chapter, and don't worry RL can just suck sometimes. now as for the story, excellent and I loved the no nonscence harry, he was cold but only to those who deserves it. and as for hermione, well if she ends up in that bathroom she will go splat with out harry. and if he does save her maybe he will get through to her about trusting authority too much, and it would do harry good to make sure that he completes his set of smart girls. and thanks for not having hermione be friends with ron without harry being there. and I'm looking foward to your next update.Elementary Calculations
(#) smr 2008-06-17
Oh wow, there's always going to be something unnerving about detached interest in the face of of another person's bleeding, especially from a child. Creepy!Harry suits him though, after all that's happened. I wonder what this will do to Dumbledore's view of him, or will he continue to hope for the best.
We've seen the last of Snape taunting Harry, though. I think he knows an untraceable death threat when he gets one.
Dumbledore's actions and motives are getting very complicated now, like it.Elementary Calculations
(#) DavidMPotter 2008-06-17
Another awesome chapter. I love this Harry. I can't wait until he puts Dumbles in his place as well. I love simpering Snape. I love the fact that Two of the 4 Heads doubt Alby.Elementary Calculations
(#) daled73 2008-06-17
This whole story is a lot more like I would have expected a real BWL to be, not Dumbeldork's doormat.
I will be ver-r-r-y interested to see where you take this, and what choices you make in developing the plot line.Elementary Calculations
(#) Anaknisatanas 2008-06-17
Harry is such a perfect mixture of Ravenclaw and Slytherin. I really think he is more Slytherin than the Death Eater children who draw attention to themselves. This story just gets better and better with each update. I'm completely captivated by the subtleties and different plot threads you've woven here.
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