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You don't have to read it if you don't want to. Honestly. I don't give a fartknocker. lol.
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Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) XxMy_Sweet_RevengexX 2008-06-22
That was the best story EVERRR. Pretty freaking amazing for your first fan fiction. Gah! It made me cry again! I can't help but feel bad for Ryan.
Just so you know, my favorite part was when he was talking to himself, and when he first started torturing Aymi, and he was all, "Well, good morning! :D" and started cutting her fingers off. Ah, good times...
And you're quite welcome for..whatever I did. I'm always happy to help.
Looking forward to your next story!!
+Alice+Author's response
Okay you know what, you need to stop crying. There's only so many boxes of tissues I can buy.
pulls out a box of Kleenex and hands it to you
:P
lol.
I'm saying thnx for reviewing (and if you know me that's like an honor 'cus you could pull my ass from a burning car and I'd be like "Meh ._."
lol.
I don't know when I'll write again, but okay.Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) emovampire 2008-06-23
OH MA GOD MY NAME WAS MENTIONED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVE YOU!!!!!!!
amazing stuff love!
keep it up!
hahaha kleenex.....Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) Lizzard 2008-06-23
OMGeeeee!
It's mah nayme!
I must keel yew nooow!
Not really, though. I'll leave that to Ryan. Or his ghost. ^_~Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) linerlover 2008-06-23
=D my name was mentioned! heheheeeeheeheeeheeehhheeeeee XD
i gotta say i really loved the chipper little 'goodmorning' as he cut off aymi's fingers. it was... entertaining.
if this is your first fanfic, i am seriously in awe. also, if it is, im afraid ill have to kill you for making the rest of us look bad. haha anyways.
writeagainwriteagainwritagainwriteagainwriteagainWRITEAGAINWRITEAGAINWRITEAGAIN
PLEAAAAAAAASE!!
haha anyways. please do. it really is great to see some truly good new authors. =]Author's response
lol, thanks.
Umm.....Please don't kill me?Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) Emo_Monkey_ATD 2008-06-23
i love this story.
crazy messed up insane mental lovesick suicidal homicidal tortuous freakish ryro just seems so much cooler than normal ryro.Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-06-23
Gawd, how I loved this story and YOU.
You cannot believe how many tears I shed, how many laughs I giggled, how many cuss words I shouted, while reading this INCREDIBLE fic.
It was just that emotive. And you can hardly find many fics that can evoke that much emotion out of me. I swear. So, two thumbs up for that one.
And the fact that you have quite the obsession with writing and the feedback, shows that you are an extremely wonderful writer. It means you are dedicated and will improve upon ANYTHING if necessary. (Which, you shouldn't have to do, because there is no need for improvement, because it was fucking AMAZING)
Gahh.
Favorite parts? Hmmm. Really, I can't choose. It was all so breathtaking. :]
BUT--
My favorite chapters were probably Be Kind, Don't Rewind and A Wonderful Caricture of Intimacy? I Don't Know. You Tell Me. (or something along those lines)
I think it gave a real feel for Ryan's emotions and how in love he was.
I also liked how you portrayed the fact that people will probably do anything for love (Well, at least Ryan) Even if it means going completely insane and murdering people. :]
Plus, you had many, many, many, MANY beautiful quotes/metaphors/youknowwhatImean out of this. You did a wonderful job on your first fic. :]
I truly hope you do write more soon. :]Author's response
awwww. thanks!
hugs you till you turn purple
I kinda don't know where to start so if everything seems all over the place, you were warned.
First,other chapters.
There were some chapters like the ones you said that I just wanted him to go out of talking to himself and to like the readers for a while.
I really liked A Diary With No Pages because a lot of that was some of my personal feelings. But anyhoo.
It's nice to know that I don't seem too crazy for the way I'm always checking things. It sorta gives me peace of mind.
Next, Some of the quotes.
I've been told in that past that I'm confusing and hard to understand.
But if you ask me, the same people who tell me that are like speaking fucking japanese so I have no idea what they're on about.
With all the metaphors and how I describe things I just want to make sure I'm not stuck with foreingers.
Last, last chapter.
Even I was blown away at some of the stuff I wrote.
Like from, Every hair curled to how I want it to stay.
After I wrote that part, I literally stopped.
Read it.
And decided I am officially certain I don't belong with the rest of society.
lol.
Moving on.
I have to say, I REALLY am suprised (and somewhat confused) at peoples reactions but that's all good.
I guess.
Lol, but for now, I'm gonna send my brain to Tahiti for nine days and just be stupid for a while. XPBet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) xStabxMyxBackx 2008-06-23
it made me sad on some parts...BUT I FUUCCCKKKING LOVED IT!!!! lol...poor ryro...WRITE MORE lol...you are an amazing writer, i have concluded that from just reading this story. i agree with all of the ^^ (above). i dont usually like angry ryro fics, but this tops them all...it was my favorite!!!!
lol
love ya!
xoxo
Niki FMBet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) HateAllFear 2008-07-01
All I can say is that you left me with chills down my spine...
And that's never happened before.
And it's a incredibly good thing.
♥♠NBet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) fearstreet101 2008-08-24
The way that you wrote this story at the begining i was expecting just a light tale of predictablity. But woa, was i wrong. i think you should be congradualting yourself on writing a story of this calibur. i just love you twist on what some would have belived to be fluff fanfiction. but i can't help but feal tearfull for what ryan did, but it makes the story that much better that he was the main character. kudos to your work, and twisted mind that can create such things. i am looking forward to reading more of your work... (i hope that i can only achive such a great story when i write one).....Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) westie 2008-12-30
I liked how it was a sort of story at first then you made it into A poem thingy. very nicely done. i loved every minute of it. I've never read a story where the bad guy was the main character, so i needed and enjoyed the change of perspective. i also liked how you didn't just stop when he shot himself like most people i know would have done, but kept going instead. kudos to you.
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