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22 Acacia Avenue
(#) lilrainforest 2008-06-23
Ohhhh man. Ray seems so clueless. LOL. it's kinda cute.
Awww Gee. Don't be so heartless. You know you wanna see Frankie. (:
Great chapter.
Update soon please!
~Rayy22 Acacia Avenue
(#) GhostOfYouMW 2008-06-23
oooh, i like!
I like how your setting gerard and frank up, and i liked the fight between gerard and gary..i like violence (: shifty eyes
Lol
anyway
update soon!
jayyy x22 Acacia Avenue
(#) MCR_dynamite 2008-06-24
Aw, this was great. I love how you explained it all, like about Ray not being a violent person and everything. It helps readers understand the characters better.
I like how you're giving hints that Gerard "likes" Frank, but not actually just throwing it out there, it makes it more believable.
Anyway, I hope you update soon, I love this story.
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