Categories > Original > Romance > Torn Into Pieces (a nick, kevin, and joe jonas love story)
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Torn Into Pieces (a nick, kevin, and joe jonas love story)
(#) puddangclaner 2008-06-26
heyy
love the story, but the thing is, instead of saw,you keep using seen. It is the flaw in a great story!!can't wait for me
(sorry for the writing major outburst)Author's response
lolz i didnt even realize that! ha! well thanks for the review and I'm SUPER glad that you like my story!
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