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If Wishes Were Hippogriffs
Formerly titled "Make a Wish." An AU fifth year story wherein Harry's fondest wishes come true. . . Harry/Multi
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If Wishes Were Hippogriffs
(#) deathcon 2008-07-02
This is a beginning of a great story. I am excited to see where you will go with it. Please keep updating.Author's response
Thanx, I'll do my best. N!If Wishes Were Hippogriffs
(#) Gweasley 2008-07-02
This is so cute, This has to be the first time that I actualy like Myrtle! Is this going to be a harem fic? Cause, not that my opinion maters but, it would be so cute just being Harry, Myrtle and maby Hermione. If it is going to be one, I wonder what Harry will think of it? I mean he just fell in love, wouldn't be kind of a shock to all of a sudden have all these grils to take care of? Well anyway great job so far. :)Author's response
I'm glad you've found a Myrtle that you like - I like her too. As far as how many in the Harem let's just say Harry is at his sexual peak, but even a horny teen has his limits. . .
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(#) uten 2008-07-08
This is the beginning of a what could be great story. I love the novel way you have of giving ghosts a corporeal form. Not only is it a great idea, I also think it's unique!! Congrats! grin
I love the personality you gave Myrtle, it's awesome. The one 'possible' error you do have is actually a little perplexing considering - it's Welsh, not Welch (from what I know - Welch has not been used in an extremely long time and is obsolete). Given Myrtle's 'age' and mixed heritage, she would use the term Welsh, AFAIK.
Anyway, I like the new name of the story and am really looking forward to the next chapter.
Your story is well structured and well written. I'm actually enjoying the lack of DumbAsADoor, although I know that will change, darn it. Hopefully too late to do anything. grin
I'm looking forward to some more explanations of some of the concepts you have introduced, especially a little more on Covens and how they work.
I'm glad Myrtle is involved. I actually like her, and love stories when she finally gets to be happy.Author's response
Thank you for reading and taking time to do a well thought out review. I’m glad you like the story so far, I tend to write the kind of stuff I like to read, so I’m having fun here – I’m sure Harry is too. . .
My mother’s mother was Welsh, I used the archaic spelling Welch thinking that, since the Wizarding world is still stuck in the Victorian age that it would be appropriate. Apparently no one got it. To avoid distraction I went beck and resubmitted the story with the 20th century spelling.
I think I can say, without fear of contradiction, that I’m Myrtle’s biggest fan – as she’s been featured in the majority of my fanfics. And she always has a happy ending. I Love that little ghost!
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(#) DavidMPotter 2008-07-08
I Love this story!!!Author's response
Thanx, I'm enjoying writing it - that's usually a good sign.
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(#) NERVSGC 2008-07-09
Please update this story soon, I like this story a lot.Author's response
Thanx, I'm updating weekly, but hopefully not weakly. . .
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(#) deamondeathstone 2009-02-12
Great fic. Liked the alternate endeings but i'm missing the transgender one.
What i mean is that God(des)takes away the magic of all the males and the males that did something to stop Moldy get turned into women so that they can keep their magic.Author's response
Thanx, and thank you, again, to Seel'vor for writing the alternate endings.
Is there a transgender ending? I haven't seen it.
Seel'vor gave me suggestions so that the original ending was more gender neutral, but that's not the same.
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(#) riclimber 2009-03-05
Great fic! A transgender alternate ending would be funny!!Author's response
Ooooooo, hadn't thought of that one, thanx!
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(#) garsdal 2011-09-29
Ahh, rereading an old classic=3
its been a long time since i read this last, and then, lo and behold i find it again while randomly searching for things involving Myrtle. (a most underused character)
and again a laughed by right butt cheek off when harry asked god (do you want mayo with that?)If Wishes Were Hippogriffs
(#) jaypatel111 2012-02-09
nice story
can I post this story on fanfiction.net or can I post it and give you credit for itIf Wishes Were Hippogriffs
(#) rockslide 2012-11-12
Well, that escalated quickly. I think I mostly liked it. The ending did take me out of it a little bit though. Seems like that might be taking the feminist sensibilities a bit far (men=evil). Though, I'm a man and I did just get done reading what is basically harem porn, so maybe you have a point there. On a side note, God seems to be a bit of a prick. I'm an atheist though, so that fits my view of a "God" pretty well actually. In any event, I was entertained even if the mindless fun of the story got a little goofy at the end.
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