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Year Two - Back to School
17 reviewsHarry gets a new suit, and Dobby pays him a visit. The Grangers pick Harry up at the airport... along with a friend. Lockhart manhandles Harry, Hogwarts needs a new DADA Professor
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Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) HarryGinnyTonks 2008-07-04
love this story - im in the yahoo group that you post bits and pieces of the story in.
One thing I liked in the earlier version: When Harry said something to the effect that Pepper was motherly, and it said something like "Tony smiled, as he filed that away to tell Pepper later, not in a meeting. She would be crying at the end."
I liked that more than the age-concept.
Great job though, looking forward to the next oneHarry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) PuckSilverbreeze 2008-07-05
Lol, I take it you liked the Iron Man moive. I don't know if Michael Kane could play Jevis, He plays Alfred not sure if the companies would allow him to cross IPs.
I like the fact that we see Tom in the Diary.Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) keichan2 2008-12-16
"Besides, knowing Hollywood, they'd probably just have your character be the AI for Dad's home computer and have J.A.R.V.I.S. be a silly acronym for something."
Given I bought and watched Iron-man last Saturday, this was especially fresh in my mind, and funny as hell!
About Dobby in Harry's bedroom, in chapter seven, you had Harry go to Hogwarts' kitchens, so even though I can understand that he might be surprised to see an elf in his room, you had Harry act like he had never seen one before...
Back to reading...Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) keichan2 2008-12-16
"Besides, knowing Hollywood, they'd probably just have your character be the AI for Dad's home computer and have J.A.R.V.I.S. be a silly acronym for something."
Given I bought and watched Iron-man last Saturday, this was especially fresh in my mind, and funny as hell!
About Dobby in Harry's bedroom, in chapter seven, you had Harry go to Hogwarts' kitchens, so even though I can understand that he might be surprised to see an elf in his room, you had Harry act like he had never seen one before...
Back to reading...Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) MrNightflame 2010-06-11
I can just picture it - V. has Harry's friends (or his D.E.s do); he threatens them with tourcher, death, and worse. Demands that Harry surrender the 'power the dark lord knows not'. Harry reluctantly does so and lets V. draw out and claim the Chaos Magic Harry has. When V. ties to use it, it destroys him. Party ensues.
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