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A Rescue and a Trap.
9 reviewsWhat if at the DoM, Harry showed a different side, a side that hid his real strength. In a act of desperation, he unlock something that was rare to wizards and witches. See inside for more. H/Hr, N...
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Harry Potter and the Midnight Phoenix.
(#) Cateagle 2008-07-01
Well, that's an interesting start to a story that most definitely captures the eader's attention. Given the condition he put himself into before getting hit with Crucio and ?crucio Maximus/, U daresay that, if he survives, the combined effects are going to be unpredictable for anyone. He could be anything from a squib to much more powerful wizard (personally, given how over-extended he was, I'd argue for a long convalesence that ends with him being significantly stronger & more powerful than he was before). It's undoubtedly the kind of thing that only Hermione, of all his friends, could really help him with.Author's response
Sorry if you are not looking for a super harry story. Harry WILL be alot stronger then he was before but he will have problems. I promise that.Harry Potter and the Midnight Phoenix.
(#) haroon_angel 2008-07-01
Wow that was a Pretty Good start although I could no Comment More until i'll read more and it was very insightful as well and was wisely written.Keep up the good Work.
Cheers
HaroonHarry Potter and the Midnight Phoenix.
(#) Dragen 2008-07-02
Great start to the story mate, I do like how Harry reacted, a lot more calmer. Good, no more Lucius thanks to Harry. Harry was right - it was better to kill them if you couldn’t get any information from them, instead of leaving them alive to commit more crimes and cause more deaths.
But how did Harry learn Occlumency?? His lession with Snape, didn't help him.
Poor Harry, I wonder what is going to happen to him?Harry Potter and the Midnight Phoenix.
(#) Tlg 2008-07-02
Well man it looks liek your story is a hit over here just like I predicted. lol. Well like I said when I agreed to take it on as a beta it is a great story with a ton of potential. Now you just got to make sure to keep thier attention.Harry Potter and the Midnight Phoenix.
(#) Isebas 2008-07-02
This story definately caught my attentiona as the others have pointed out. It kept me on the edge of my seat and I can't wait to read more.
Later,
IsebasHarry Potter and the Midnight Phoenix.
(#) Isebas 2008-07-02
This story definately caught my attentiona as the others have pointed out. It kept me on the edge of my seat and I can't wait to read more.
Later,
IsebasHarry Potter and the Midnight Phoenix.
(#) Cateagle 2008-07-04
Sorry if you are not looking for a super harry story. Harry WILL be alot stronger then he was before but he will have problems. I promise that
I quite figured that and I was merely commenting on the variety of ways it could go; super-Harry doesn't bother me if there's a decent rationale behind it and you have most definitely established that. IMHO, greater power brings greater headaches (one reason I've never aspired to the ranks of management). It'll be interesting to seeHarry Potter and the Midnight Phoenix.
(#) GryffindorDragon 2008-07-27
Interesting start. Though some sort of back story might be helpful to understand how Harry got so capable to be throwing curses left and right at Lucius, defeating and killing him, with Avada Kedavra at that.
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