- Well, that's an interesting start to a story that most definitely captures the eader's attention. Given the condition he put himself into before getting hit with Crucio and ?crucio Maximus/, U daresay that, if he survives, the combined effects are going to be unpredictable for anyone. He could be anything from a squib to much more powerful wizard (personally, given how over-extended he was, I'd argue for a long convalesence that ends with him being significantly stronger & more powerful than he was before). It's undoubtedly the kind of thing that only Hermione, of all his friends, could really help him with.
Author's responseSorry if you are not looking for a super harry story. Harry WILL be alot stronger then he was before but he will have problems. I promise that.
- Great start to the story mate, I do like how Harry reacted, a lot more calmer. Good, no more Lucius thanks to Harry. Harry was right - it was better to kill them if you couldn’t get any information from them, instead of leaving them alive to commit more crimes and cause more deaths.
But how did Harry learn Occlumency?? His lession with Snape, didn't help him.
Poor Harry, I wonder what is going to happen to him?
- Sorry if you are not looking for a super harry story. Harry WILL be alot stronger then he was before but he will have problems. I promise that
I quite figured that and I was merely commenting on the variety of ways it could go; super-Harry doesn't bother me if there's a decent rationale behind it and you have most definitely established that. IMHO, greater power brings greater headaches (one reason I've never aspired to the ranks of management). It'll be interesting to see
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