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Tri-Wizard, Again
(#) dougal74 2008-07-05
A very well written chapter.
If you want to get Tonk's involved, there are a number of things you could do.
1. De-age her so she is a final year student, you could even enter her into the tournament.
2. Have her as security at either the Quiditch World Cup or At the school cos of the Tri-Wizard Tournament...maybe by having a hightened security threat this time around.
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(#) Wolfric 2008-07-05
Good chapter. Albus will have a fit if Harry's rescue of Fleur makes the paper. I am enjoying the story and anticipating the next installment. Thanks for writing. W.Tri-Wizard, Again
(#) DavidMPotter 2008-07-05
Another brilliant chapter. I loved the Harry Fleur scene. I so look forward to coming chapters.Tri-Wizard, Again
(#) 31415 2008-07-05
'Your village called. There idiot is missing'
An ironic mistake if ever there was one. A mildly entertaining story, riddled with clichés though it is.Tri-Wizard, Again
(#) jsdailey 2008-07-05
Hookers! Ha!
A well written chapter; keep up the good work.Tri-Wizard, Again
(#) Cateagle 2008-07-05
I loved the encounter with Fleur; I daresay that this time she will not call him a "little boy". On the ohter hand, I can just imagine the consternation with which Albus will read this news. Meanwhile, the time at the Weasleys was a fun and relaxing time that I'm sure he enjoyed (though I can think of several of them at whom that tshirt could've been aimed). Finally, the harvesting of the Basilisk and the assumption by Right of Conquest of the Headship of the Slytherin family is going to make for some interseting times in and out of the Wizgeamot, sep. if Harry follows through and appoints Remus as his proxy.Tri-Wizard, Again
(#) Under_score 2008-07-10
I rather like this story, you are rather correct to assume the interaction with the Weasley's was seemingly under explored, they should of tried to scold him for his actions and act in a manner which would cause Harry to move away from them.
The Fleur scene flowed better with the story, and it was different from other stories I've read and I can only suggest that you start moving away from the cliches soon (i.e. Head of millions of families).Tri-Wizard, Again
(#) Ciroth 2008-09-13
Interesting so far. Update soon and lets see where you go with it.
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