- A very well written chapter.
If you want to get Tonk's involved, there are a number of things you could do.
1. De-age her so she is a final year student, you could even enter her into the tournament.
2. Have her as security at either the Quiditch World Cup or At the school cos of the Tri-Wizard Tournament...maybe by having a hightened security threat this time around.
- I loved the encounter with Fleur; I daresay that this time she will not call him a "little boy". On the ohter hand, I can just imagine the consternation with which Albus will read this news. Meanwhile, the time at the Weasleys was a fun and relaxing time that I'm sure he enjoyed (though I can think of several of them at whom that tshirt could've been aimed). Finally, the harvesting of the Basilisk and the assumption by Right of Conquest of the Headship of the Slytherin family is going to make for some interseting times in and out of the Wizgeamot, sep. if Harry follows through and appoints Remus as his proxy.
(#) Under_score 2008-07-10I rather like this story, you are rather correct to assume the interaction with the Weasley's was seemingly under explored, they should of tried to scold him for his actions and act in a manner which would cause Harry to move away from them.
The Fleur scene flowed better with the story, and it was different from other stories I've read and I can only suggest that you start moving away from the cliches soon (i.e. Head of millions of families).
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