Harry's future self comes back to help Harry before his 5th year.
great start i look forward to more
Sirius animgus form is a black dog looking like a grim, not a wolf.
Other than Sirius' form being a grim-like dog instead of a wolf, I think the story has potential. I'm always up for a good Ron-bashing or redo fic! :D
Good start! I do hope it not Harry/Ginny
(#) nyef 2008-07-08
Thus far, I see a competently-executed redo story with a number of cliche elements and two or three original ones. I found myself wishing that the rating system offered a "+1 Cliche" option, and am looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
Well this seems to have possibilities. I would like to see where you are headed. Thanks for writing. W.
Briliant start! Nasty cliffy, but it's ok. Now just keep at it. I know some people will moan about updates and I am sorely tempted, but I wont. Just keep it as regular as you can.
Good start. But why does everyone hate Ron so much. He is just a kid with an inferiority complex. Give him a break. Its hard to live your life in someones (his brothers and sister) shadow then leave that shadow and find your self in someone elses (harry)
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