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A Hero's Journey Again
(#) Razgriz03 2008-07-11
Do the Harem!!!
Heck Yeah!!!
Your doing an above acceptable but a few strikes from exceeding expectations...
Good Luck!
Hope you update soon!!!A Hero's Journey Again
(#) Alteca 2008-07-11
I like the story and find it interesting. I love the coming back in time with greater abilites and body plot line. I would like to see major revelations and punishment of Dumbledore,Ron,Fudge,and the reorganization of the Ministry. The pairings I would like to see are H/P and Hermione with someone who Harry can get along with,who challenges her, and brings her out of her shell. Thanks for writing and please write more soon.A Hero's Journey Again
(#) skwerewolf 2008-07-11
looks great so far....as for the pairing, i vote for harry/padmaA Hero's Journey Again
(#) Anaerobie 2008-07-11
My vote for the pairing proposed is Harry/Padma.
Thought I prefer personnally a Harry/harem with Harry and three girls from the other houses (Padma or Luna, Susan Bones, and a slytherin girl like Daphne Greengrass)and perhaps a veela.
But it is your story.
Good Story. Keep the effort going.I like the idea of Sirus animagus form being a wolf.A Hero's Journey Again
(#) jabarber69 2008-07-11
hey like the whole trunk thingy, and I'm sorry to see no hp/mione but in that case how about hp/ginny/padma!A Hero's Journey Again
(#) tumshie1960 2008-07-11
You need to remember that harry was brought up as a muggle therefore would know the difference between a dog and a wolf, that and in the books Padfoot is a dog.
As for the ships, run them whatever way you want, and as this is a redo fic you can always redeem Ron by having Harry steer him away from Dumbledore.
You also need to deal with Umbridge and Snape sooner rather than later.A Hero's Journey Again
(#) sagesolon 2008-07-11
Here's my vote: Harry/Padma/Ginny/ and Tonks as a little spice. Maybe as a protector for them and she gets a bit too involved... maybe has a blow up fight with Remus or Dumbledore and Harry and his girls console her and she gets involved with them. But, it is your story. I also like Daphne so maybe she can get a little Harry lovin too.
A Hero's Journey Again
(#) DavidMPotter 2008-07-11
I love the fic. I look forward to more. I too hate Harry/Ginny so anything but that.
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