(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-07-19Oh my.
I really love this. So much.
It's written in utter perfection, as well as the realistic-ness of your characters?
Brendon? Is so awfully sweet that I feel the sudden urge to give him a HUGE hug. He is adorable and I wish he were my boyfriend. ;]
Izabel? Is hopelessly in love and it was so terribly sad to read her heartbreak over Brendon's leaving. She, as well, deserves a HUGE hug.
I do enjoy the signficance of the movie Ferris Bueller's Day Off between the two. I mean, it's kind of a small thing, but you wrote it like it meant the world to her, which it probably did, and you portrayed that fact well. :]
The ending? Made me shout, "AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!" and it's 3 AM, so I hope I didn't wake anyone.
This was an AMAZING one-shot and I love it so much. :]
Author's responseThank you darling.
I needed something to portray how close their bond was, and the movie was an excellent way to do that.
Also, when I am grieving or just not in a happy mood, I wear flannel PJs, eat Ben & Jerrys and watch a funny movie. I wanted that for Iz, and more importantly, I wanted Brendon to know that.
Thank you for your review, love!
(#) Life_is_42 2008-08-06I hope that if I don't acknowledge the day, then maybe it will never come. And then maybe Bren could stay with me. A girl can dream… unless she has been woken up by her boyfriend. The sunlight glistened lightly through the window,
This strongly reminded me of the scene in Romeo and Juliet, right after they were married. =D. I Hugely appreciate the shakespearian similarity!!! Wewt!
I put my face in my icy, clammy hands and continue the cries. The poor box of Kleenex next to me must feel so neglected,
Aw, no! Kleenex ~huggles it~ is amazing!! Hehe. I kind of giggled at that though, then felt kind of bad about giggling XD
I find humor in weird places. Yes I frequently get odd looks =D
Omg your writing style is beautiful! I truly enjoyed reading through the story! You know some of those stories where you skim through because there is so much illiterate description, but the plot is mildly interesting? Well this wasn’t one of them! This was original, cute, and every word captured my attention!
By the way I was just thinking how much I LOVED the ending, then I read you’re a/n and was like ‘what? Why don’t you like it! ~Gasp~’
Hehe. Anyways! Just thought I’d drop a lil review!!!!!!!! xoxoxoxoxox
Author's responseThanks for the review Lifey.
And yes, I understand finding humor in odd places.
I watched Monty Python and the Holy Grail when I was wee little. And it messed with me for LIFE.
Again, thank you!
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