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Fools Rush In
(#) DrT 2008-07-28
I do enjoy a well-thought out ritual. Yours had just enough detailAuthor's response
Thanks, I'm glad you think I got the balance right. I hate it when authors go into too much unneccessary detail, I tend to just scroll down and skim it, but it's equally as bad when too much is left out. Keep the wonderful reviews coming :)Fools Rush In
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-07-28
Very good here, from Grammy and her teasing and Harry knowing Ginny wouldn't have the money to get a pic, to Hedwig and her unholy revenge on Seamus as he changed her color, just laughing at the idea of a purple owl.Author's response
Yes, I was thinking a lurid toxic purple! Thanks for the review :)Fools Rush In
(#) Cateagle 2008-07-28
Nicely developed ritual, you've shown. It would be rather amusing if the ritual had removed not only all spells on Harry, but through his intense bond with his wand, on the wand, too, so that the Ministry could no longer track him. It should be interesting to see how the summer develops from here.Author's response
Aah you shall have to wait and see if the spells on his wand have been removed. Yes, he shall only be with Seamus and Dean for another chapter, maybe two. Thanks for the review :)Fools Rush In
(#) Wolfric 2008-07-28
Grammy and Prof. Conaghan seem like they might make good allies for the future. I have enjoyed your fine story and look forward to future installments; especially a good confrontation with Albus. Thanks for writing. W.Author's response
I'm going to reply to both your reviews with one as it will be easier-I hope you don't mind.Hmm you are quite the smart bunny! No the ritual just got rid of what was already there, he'll have to come up with something else in the future. As for Grammy and Professor Conaghan, they are allies who quite like him, but he knows they have their own agenda and therefore must be careful in how much he trusts them. The confrontation won't be for a while yet so I'm afriad you'll have to wait. Thanks for the reviews :)Fools Rush In
(#) Wolfric 2008-07-28
It occurs to me that Harry needs a spell or ritual that will displace all future tracking spells onto Draco or Collin. Or will the ritual he just did rebuff such attempts? W.Fools Rush In
(#) slashslut 2008-07-29
i love granny's character and am glad to see other characters other than the usual cast featured so prominently. your chapters are well-written and plotted. im definitely looking forward to future updates, particularly when harry gets hold of dumbles and snape. oh, and i hope the goblins will play a role. for some reason i really like them!Author's response
I'm afraid Grammy is gone for now :( and will probably only be a bit character in the future. Yes a lot of people like the fact Seamus and Dean are being used, it's easier to write a character that hasn't really been developed by someone else! He won't be getting a hold of wither of those two for a while, but the goblins may have a future role-you'll just ahve to wait and see! I have a short interlude sent to my beta which should be up soon so I hope you enjoy that too. Thanks for the review and sorry for the late reply.Fools Rush In
(#) Clell65619 2008-07-30
- A most wonderful story. You've captured the joys of three young men messing with each other perfectly. Looking forward to your next chapter.Fools Rush In
(#) Shadow_Dance 2008-07-30
A brilliant story. I love the dynamics between the boys - very believable. Also a very original story.Fools Rush In
(#) ladysavay 2008-08-01
I'm loving this. You made me laugh out loud with that line about Voldemort squinting in the sun. GREAT!
I can't wait to find out what all the ritual did for him and his wand and how he will avoid Bumblefuck just casting and dosing him all over again.
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