Categories > Books > Harry Potter > Fools Rush In
Reviews
Fools Rush In
(#) GrantLarceny 2008-11-09
this may or may not be a good story...you have some kind of formatting problem so all the paragraphs are jumbled together...i didnt really read it because the formatting problem makes it difficult...this problem appeared to be true for all of the chapters...some people would give the 'illiterate' rating to this story for this problem but i will wait and see if you fix it
thxFools Rush In
(#) Cliviussum 2008-11-09
What a wonderful and arresting story; I love the slightly anarchic feel of the humour and the characters are truly priceless.
Not only have you seemingly collected the mischievous essence of the teenage male, but also the sometimes caustic humour of the elderly.
Grammy is a delightful character, whom I would love to meet - so alive; your writing paints a picture that a photograph would have difficulty improving.
There are many amusing lines varying from gentle whimsy to extreme satire, but the one that sticks in my mind, is Harry's remark to his crup after the altercation with the cerberus; regarding the need for a cleaning charm!
Thank you for this remarkable accolade to your writing ability. There is no way I am missing any further chapters!
Tibi grates ago fabellae mirae, et probe. Observabo capituli amplius. Vale Clivius
Fools Rush In
(#) Vanir 2008-11-09
Very, very nice. The fact that you hint at more than you describe allows me to fill in the details myself. That's usually a whole lot better than detailed accounts. I'd love some more spacing. Edit-wise it's a bit hard to read sometimes. There's the occasional wall of words that hinders the storyflow a bit. Yeah, pot, kettle and all that.
I love the story. Update in your own time.
VanirFools Rush In
(#) slashslut 2008-11-13
im quite loving grammy's character and am looking forward to her no-nonsense yet loving attitude throughout the story. and im REALLY looking forward to a confrontation with dumbles at some point! if it's anything like the ritual bit you wrote, it'll be a doozie (in a good way!)Fools Rush In
(#) red_jacobson 2008-11-26
I just found this story by chance this morning, and I am quite enjoying it. Like the other reviewers, I love Grammy! And the interaction between Harry Dean and Seamus is a hoot!
I just noticed that it's been several months since the last chapter, do you have any idea when the next chapter will be posted?
Red
Sign up to review this story.