Categories > Celebrities > The Used > Now I'm Everyone
teenage girl (rose frankner) life forces her into the comfort of her music
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Now I'm Everyone
(#) QuitLollygaggin 2008-08-04
awwee bert!!
updatee soon please!?Author's response
will definately try my best but I'm on holiday without a computer so it might be a while.
EllaNow I'm Everyone
(#) IeroMyHero 2008-08-05
HAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh my God, that cracked me up! Oh God, that's probably exactly what I'd end up screaming if I saw Bert anywhere. And I'd imagine him saying something like, "WHERE?!"
Write more. This looks cool. But can you possibly break your story into paragraphs? It's a little bit confusing.Author's response
Haha yeah. And thanks for the advice will definately try my best with the next chapter but it while as I'm on holiday and I don't have a proper computer and I'm currently writing this using my mums iPod but will do my best to get it out within a month thanks again =)
EllaNow I'm Everyone
(#) Immz 2008-08-26
Damn it, I wasn't first to review. Ela dude, hurry up with the next chapter, write on your iPod even haha.
Ahhh, Bert McCracken, yeah I'm getting obsessed with him again. His eyes just draw you in =D
The only thing I can think of is what IeroMyHero said, because I do a weird thing where I skip lines a lot so my having glasses clearly doesn't make a difference lol.
Oh yeah, when do you get back by the way?
"Paralysed by the same old antics, back and forth like some walking spastic..."
(That wasn't aimed at you by the way.)
Oh did you know if Bert was still a Mormon, he would have to have short hair? Oh dear, can you imagine haha.Author's response
Bestest buddy!! Lol short hair Christ now that would be weird ... almost as weird as jonnys beard lol and I'm back next wedensday morning can't wait to be back in London . We get to hang out again after like 6 weeks. We've been apart so long lol. Speak to you soon
ly xxxxxxx
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