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"He was utterly shocked, utterly happy, and utterly astonished that right there, before his eyes, she stood. Right there. Ten feet away."
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My Time Will Come..(Won't It?)
(#) pyrotechnicist 2008-08-02
yo zaydee my love!
you updated!
i was like WOW! GO PO ( lol yes i know that all rhymed)
im just kool like that =P
it was great.
i say leave it.
its a good spot to end.
they are happy, and there wont be some sickly sweet...12 years later with 10 kids chap
yep anywho
lover you
2*R
xx
My Time Will Come..(Won't It?)
(#) doyleangel 2008-08-02
i loved it, where it ended. hopefully pat really plans to be nice to her from now on. I'm totally for a sequel, one where they're actually happy being together, but obviously some kind of drama or it wouldn't be a story now would it? lol....but i'm for the sequel sideMy Time Will Come..(Won't It?)
(#) xFallxOutxBoyxFanx 2008-12-20
Lol i know im kinda late on this, but I just read the whole thing and I loved it. I don't think I really like the ending tho for some reason. After all of that she just forgives him like that? It kinda makes me sick, but I guess thats unconditional love right? Well I loved it so much and you should make a sequal (if you haven't already).Author's response
Thank you! :] I really appreciate that comment. Ttly made me all ~happy. I won't be writing a sequel to this story, simply because I'm afraid it would ruin part one or be sucky. haha. But I do have to new fics if you'd like to check them out. They're "The girl on the side of the road" and "Unloveable."
-Zayyy
Thank you! :] I really appreciate that comment. Ttly made me all ~happy. I won't be writing a sequel to this story, simply because I'm afraid it would ruin part one or be sucky. haha. But I do have to new fics if you'd like to check them out. They're "The girl on the side of the road" and "Unloveable."
-Zayyy
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