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You Stole My Breath
(#) medicatedlives 2008-08-06
Oh, I see what's going on here. -nudge nudge-
That police officer kindof needs to gtfo even if he's super hot. Mhm. Because obviously, he cannot compete with the wonderful wonderful Jon Walker.
I'm glad to see an update after a while. I'll be waiting for the next one!Author's response
I hope you don't see everything that's going on here. I hope to have at least a few surprises for you. : ) And really I don't think Logan can compete with Jon Walker either. Hopefully Cassia will decide the same thing.You Stole My Breath
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-08-06
What's this?
Is it...
No, it can't be!
BUT IT IS!
OMG, IT'S AN UPDATE!
-gasp-
NO WAY.
-dances in a frilly dress in complete excitement-
A few days ago, I was wondering where this story had gone and I began to fear that you had abandon it. But, alas! You have not! For this, I am truly happy!
[Despite the fact that I'm acting like an overly-obsessed fangirl over this story, I actually am excited that you updated.]
So, enough of this pointless rant, I think I'll give you a nice review now. :]
Firstly, I adore Regina's character so much. And it's not just that you make your characters so real, it's the personalities behind them as well. She's fun, bubbly, and I would love to have her as a friend.
Oh, and Logan? SUPA hot. XD
Even though this police officer has a rockin' body, I agree with medicatedlives. Jon is a kajillion times amazinger! [Amazinger? A word? No, I don't think so. But, hey, if Shakespeare can create words, so can I!]
I really, really, really, really, really, really, REALLY, REALLY, REALLY hope that she goes on tour with Regina and Panic! [I know, I know, they got rid of the exclaimation point, but I still use it because I loved that thing. So sue me.] :]
Other than your fantastico characters, I have to say something about how beautifully you write.
Your words strike me in awe. They flow together flawlessly and I am jealous of your skillz. But, you are probably already aware of your marvelous writing ability, so I guess I'll just stop there.
Unless, you are like me, who is insecure over like, everything. If you are, please don't be. Your writing is so descriptive and lovely. ACK! Why can't I think of the words to tell you how amazing these chapters truly are? You leave me speechless!
Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens if Cassia DOES attend tour with her best friend, because Jon will be there and everything will be like, "WHOA"
So, I am very excited to see what happens next.
Well, I gotta go.
UPDATE SOON!
:]Author's response
I think I was just as shocked about finally posting this chapter as you were. I only wish I had a frilly dress to dance in. haha. I'm glad that even with my absence everyone is still around to read this story. I really like where it's heading and I have some really great stuff planned.
I think my characters, if not just Regina's, seem so real because I've taken their mannerisms or sort of things they say from people I know. Regina is definitely like a lot of my friends put together into one person.
As for Logan, I wouldn't worry about him too much. You'll see what I mean in the next chapter.
Once again, I don't think I can thank you enough for all of the compliments that you give in your replies. Honestly, apart from sharing my stories on sites like this I don't let anyone read the things I write because I'm afraid to hear what they'll think. Most of the time I like what I write but I'm afraid someone is going to tell me isn't not as great as I had hoped. I dunno, I'm super paranoid about that kind of thing. So basically, thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you. Response like yours and the others that I receive are definitely what keep me writing!
New update VERY soon.You Stole My Breath
(#) Life_is_42 2008-08-06
gah so usually i'm one for leaving long reviews! but dear IceCreamHeadache kind of covered a lot of the points i was going to make xD
I'm just SO pleased to be reading an actively updated Jon Walker story (he's my favorite...although i've been told that choosing favorites isdn't nice).
Lol the whole Hot Officer thing reminds me of a friend of my mom's who is always like "Oh my god. police officers and firemen are always SO attractive. seriously. i've never seen an unattractive firefighter" so i giggle at Officer L. Stone XD
well anyway. you know how twilighters have team edward team jacob? (team edward btw).
TEAM JWALK!!!!!! wewt!!!!!! forever and always. because the man is just TOO cool for his own good.Author's response
Choosing favorites isn't nice? uh oh, cause Jon is my favorite too! I'm not much of a twilight fan, but I'm definitely with you on team JWALK. We can share him thought, right?
I've definitely heard the same about police officers. I also once met a very attractive Officer Stone. His name wasn't Logan though. But the inspiration was still there. lol.
Proof Jon is way too cool for his own good, I once asked him what he missed most about chicago and he answered TACOS. He got really excited about it too. That's definitely proof of his amazingness. hahaYou Stole My Breath
(#) falloutbaby89 2008-08-08
Okay, before I read the 5th chapter cause I have been trying to review before but internet gave me shit. I love this story. It's comical and it was JWALK in it who is too delicious. lol. You're a great writer.
Jon Walker is too cool. We need more stories of him, so thanks for writing one.
Okay, I'm going to read the next chapter. After that one, please update soon.Author's response
Thank you for taking the time to review, especially with your internet giving you trouble! I know what a pain ficwad can be sometimes.
I'm really glad you like the story, it's probably one of my favorites I've written (especially recently, I've been kind of in a slump with everything else I've started).
The next chapter I have to post (chapter 6) is the first one I wrote for this story. If that makes sense. Basically I got the idea and wrote it and then used five chapters to figure out how to get to that point. I'm really excited for everyone to read it.
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