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"That's not the 'what' I meant."
5 reviews"Why's it so hard to believe that someone doesn't want anything?" Patrick asked. "Because. She's human." "More like Superhuman."
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Stuttering
(#) watch_the_sky 2008-08-20
idk why no one else thinks they should review but im gonna slap them all. haha, jk. but i do want to slap patrick and joe -- i just cant decide which one i want to hurt more. anyways, great update, as always!
xo
karaStuttering
(#) falloutbaby89 2008-08-20
I think I can see a bit of the light with Patrick and Cali. Counselling could help. There is a lot of love there, Patrick needs to just sort himself out. I loved this chapter a lot. Please update soon.Stuttering
(#) ItsxMirandahh 2008-08-20
I did a little dance when I found out you updated. (x
And hoorah for counseling! I want everybody to be happy, hah. I know I'll love it no matter where you go with it, though.
Mucho love,
Miranda.Stuttering
(#) lushlushlush94 2008-08-20
I loved it, FINALLY patrick does something more than be... frustrating! sorry I haven't commented before, but I've read the whole story and loved it all, even the confusing bits. I'm totally comitting to commenting every chapter from now on.
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KatieAuthor's response
what made you confused dear? i must know so i can fix it fast. or at least tell you what was meant and what not. i'm glad you like the story.
love,
CalStuttering
(#) lushlushlush94 2008-08-20
it wasn't so much that it was confusing in the sense that it needed to be fixed as much as the actions of the characters are very different from what you see in most storys, it takes a bit of getting used to, but I think that's part of what makes it good.
♥♥♥
Katie
Author's response
ah yes. see we HATE cliché stories. Patrick meets her, Patrick falls in love, they get married and thats the end. no heath ache, no confusion, no trials and problems. those stories make me wanna pull my hair out only because what REAL relationship do you know that is like that. shit not mine, my relationships suck. the person Cal was dating in the beginning of this story with the texts to another girl.. yup that REALLY happened to me. so yea we try and make it as realistic as a fic can be i guess. sorry for the mix up lol we didn't think their were enough stories on here like that so we made one! if you think this story is not like any you've read and is nothing like every other fan fic then weve done our job correctly.
thanks for supporting our craziness.
Cal&Gin
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