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Untold Paradox
(#) Moonshyne 2008-08-22
Hi there Dondon,
Pooe Jamia and Frank they are both so devestated. I loved reading it.
Juat one small hint of criticism. When someone new is speaking it should be a new paragraph. It just makes it so much easier to read. Other than that it's great.Author's response
I know there both silly!
Im sorry about the paragraph thing, I always forget.
Thanks for your review :)Untold Paradox
(#) PrayerOfTheRefugee 2008-08-22
SHE'S NOT CUTTING IS SHE?! NOOO!!!
Men can be so fucking stupid sometimes.Poor Jamia.Author's response
All shall be revealed..
:P
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