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• Untold Paradox

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-08-23

  Hi there Dondon,
  
  I thought they were going to come to their rescue and save them. That was a great cliffhanger.
  
  I almost felt bad for Cassie, but you don't solve your problems like that. Poor Frank saw a very ugly side of Jamia does it effect their relationship if they make it out alive?
  
  Have a great holiday and I'll be looking forward to an update when you get back (or sooner).

  Author's response

  Hey Moonshyne,
  
  I know, Jamia is ashamed of that part of her past and didnt want Frank to know. Trust Cassie to spoil it all.
  
  Im not sure what to do with Frank and Jamia's relationship yet, if they are alive that is.
  
  Looking forward to hearing what you think of the new chapters I will post soon :)

• Untold Paradox

  (#) clutsy_93 2008-08-23

  Oh my god
  At the start of this story I never expected this to happen!!!
  WOW.
  Loved it and can't wait for more.
  x.
  Samantha

• Untold Paradox

  (#) PrayerOfTheRefugee 2008-08-23

  OMG! Cassie and Tony are so evil (duh everyone knew that i just wanted to say it)
  Wonder why Jamia did that?
  Are they all gonna die? "growls" evil cliff hanger.
  Have fun on vacation.
  
  BTW more people need to read this story.

  Author's response

  I know, there very evil.
  
  Thanks for your lovely review :)
  
  And I agree, more people should read my story :P

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