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Away From Here
6 reviewsAre you trying to get me drunk? Bbbbbboooooobbbb, Gerard gets a mouthful, learing at Frank and hazy memories.
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Deadlines
(#) moonpig 2008-08-27
WELCOME BACK NEVE.
I loved your update especially Ruth reacting to Gerard at the door - priceless.
Your story makes me laugh so much and i absolutely love it. I truly believe in the way you write Bob.Author's response
Thank you so much Moonpig, i can't help the funny stuff and i'm so pleased you guys get it.
I love writing Ruth, she's so in your face. I know i'm taking total liberties in terms of Jill's interaction with them but hey it's my story so i get to make it up.Deadlines
(#) Moonshyne 2008-08-27
Welcome Back!!!
I was so excited to see the update!!
I loved it!!
I agree the whole intercom thing was hysterical.
And Bob was so kind and loving. I can't wait for the tour to begin.Author's response
Hi Moonshyne, thanks for reviewing and i'm glad you are still enjoying the story.
I'm so pleased you like the interaction between Jill and Bob. I think Bob would be very much a private kind of guy. Jill is very much laughing everything off at the moment.
Oh but the tour - now that will be interesting and well Frank just can't help himself meddling.Deadlines
(#) cutegirl12356 2008-08-27
Awwwwwww don't think that Jilly.....Bob totally has the hotts for you....lol....MORE i love it!Author's response
ha ha thank you. They are such a stubborn pair.Deadlines
(#) moviemaniac888 2008-08-27
Loved the Update!
Superb. as always.
as mentioned above, intercom scene ...amazing.
laughed so hard.
I love how you write all the characters, giving each of them their own personality and quirkiness.
So excited to read more.Author's response
Wow thank you. I really appreciate you taking the time to review it really means so much to me.Deadlines
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-08-28
thanks for updating! i agree with the other guys, i love the humour!
can't wait for another update.
this is one of those stories that i read with a smile on my face!
thank you.Author's response
What a compliment and i'm so happy i can make you smile. I can't believe i've posted 14 chapters and people are still hanging in with this - cheers guys.Deadlines
(#) canustakemyheart 2008-11-02
Love the way you write the interaction between everyone =D
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