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• Summer 4th year Revised

  (#) kyzhart 2008-09-13

  Wonderful. I do hope you decide to extend this. I liked Sirius getting Harry out of the Dursley's and taking an active roll in moulding Harry into the man he will become. Also that he didn't just focus on fighting but added stuff to promote living his life rather than mearly existing in it.

• Summer 4th year Revised

  (#) Cwejr 2008-09-14

  I enjoyed the story,except for the ending. It seems to stop in mid chapter. It needs closure.
  
  I was looking forward to another chapter, at least. Ron's reaction to Harry/Hermione bonding.... Could be very interesting. The way it ended seems like a cliffhanger. Something's missing.
  
  If you don't continue the story, how about a sequel?

• Summer 4th year Revised

  (#) red_jacobson 2008-10-10

  I have to agree with many of the other reviewers, this is an excellent story; and I would love to see it continued.
  
  Red

• Summer 4th year Revised

  (#) jabarber69 2008-11-29

  Hey that was bloody brilliant! After reading your story Potters Surprise I figure I would check to see if you had any other stories, and much to my surprise I found one of my favorite hp stories and that is Motorcycle...by the way I sure hope you continue that and soon! but anyway I also found this story, and realizing that I like the way you write and your hp stories and liking the summary to this story I gave it a whirl...right off the bat with the letter from sirius and his portkey to the island and then the part with exercising and coming out of his shell and the hermione and her mum visiting...oh yeah the dancing part was brilliant too, been nice to actually see that, love to watch two couples dancing the tango or what brings to my mind even though it aint the tango is that dance between antonion banderious and catherine zeta jones in the first zorro movie...but to close thank you for a great time reading this!

• Summer 4th year Revised

  (#) Sch1av0na 2008-12-02

  Wonderful story for the summer after their their fourth year.
  
  I do hope that you continue this with another story to cover their fifth year at Hogwarts.
  
  Thanks for posting it for us to enjoy.

• Summer 4th year Revised

  (#) Dragon451 2008-12-08

  I enjoyed reading this both to myself and my wife. I wish you would do maybe at least an epilogue showing how things turn out after Big V gets his due.

• Summer 4th year Revised

  (#) hlpur 2009-04-17

  A very nice story. Perhaps a Summer 5th year Revised is in order. Since Harry was not left to brood at his aunt's, was not charged with underage magic, and his relationship with Hermione is clarified, Harry's fifth year would turn out different.
  
  Thank you for sharing.

• Summer 4th year Revised

  (#) Wolfric 2009-04-28

  Great story. I'm missing all the things Sirius taught Harry to do to Snape and Dumbledore. You know he would. There is a fine story by Bobmin at fanficauthors called "Power of the Press" that has a few common scenes that you might like. Thanks for writing. W.

• Summer 4th year Revised

  (#) Nightrunner 2009-05-03

  I do hope that you will continue this great little story.
  I am really curious to see whop Ginny goes after, and How Ron is going to take this new relationship between Harry and Hermione. Also, I want to see Dumbles and Molly's plan go down in flames.
  
  I really dislike meddlers. Especially ones with no morals or ethics.
  
  Robert

• Summer 4th year Revised

  (#) chanewt906 2009-06-21

  Wonderful; got some more pages for us?

  Author's response

  I'm on my third attempt at a sequel and still not pleased with it. It has improved each time however so there is hope.
  
  Scruffy.

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