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• Thoughts of Pudding

  (#) stealacandy 2008-08-31

  Jolly, a cliffhanger secreted away in the bulk of the chapter rather than in the end.
  
  I hope you won't take to long to tell us about the clinging and clacking device in Dumbledore's office.
  
  Keep up the good wor,
  
  
  Cheers,
  
  
  
  -mo

• Thoughts of Pudding

  (#) DrT 2008-08-31

  Excellent update. I hope this means we'll find out more about what Snape is up to soon.

• Thoughts of Pudding

  (#) Wonderbee31 2008-08-31

  Oh. That was a surprise there at the end, and Luna really laid it out pretty bluntly didn't she? It's got me wondering if this will end up as a new romantic trio or not, or if things will fall apart because Harry is so wishy-washy that he'd push them both away for their own good. Ron, well, right now, the little brat needs to grow up, and he seems determined not to if he thinks Harry has it so easy and everything. Looking forward to what Snape has to say, and what that will mean about the little thing in Albus' office.

• Thoughts of Pudding

  (#) dennisud 2008-08-31

  "I do love you, Harry." She said. "But I want you to think about what we've talked about tonight. I want you to be with me because you want to be, not because you've settled for me because you didn't get the girl you really wanted."
  
  That was like a kick in the emotional gut. And Luna would be the one who could get away with saying that to Harry.
  
  So we have now in Harry's mind that fact that he put himself in a lower rung so Ron could have had harmione AND Luna without him saying much.
  
  Which puts the ball in harry's court given now that the idea of him having hermione closer as well as Luna should become more acceptible to him. I think it will take a few chapters and the rest of the summer to work out.
  
  Also I can't wait to see how Dumbles deals with the loss of his Order and Harry's status at the start of the school year.
  
  Great job so far!
  
  dennisud

• Thoughts of Pudding

  (#) Vanir 2008-08-31

  Nicely hung cliff there. Both the Snape thing and the device, even if i do believe that the device simply warns for Harry being out of range. Nice use of Swedish, and i did appreciate my little cameo there as well. you used just the lines that would be subtitled in the movies. The emotional conundrum that is Luna continues to surprise me, and I'm looking forward to seeing the development on all fronts. Keep it up!
  
  Vanir

• Thoughts of Pudding

  (#) issabissa 2008-08-31

  What a chapter!!!!! I really loved it!!! You are doing an awesome job!!!!!! Keep up the great work!!! Looking forward to the next bit and see what happens with this cliffie that you left us on. I just hope that we are not going to have to deal with to much of a "I don't get anything you steal everything away from me" Ron. He can be annoying to read.

• Thoughts of Pudding

  (#) PerfesserN 2008-08-31

  I do enjoy reading your version of my favorite Ravenclaw.
  Sounds like Luna wants to give Harry some space to work out his feelings for Hermione - that girl is wise beyond her years; you'd never catch Ginny doing that.
  I wonder - does Luna share? A common fantasy I know, but one that I'm comfortable with. . .
  N!

• Thoughts of Pudding

  (#) DavidMPotter 2008-08-31

  I am really enjoying this story. I love Luna's wisdom and love seeing Dumbles stumped. I wish Dumbles would open his eyes to Snape.

• Thoughts of Pudding

  (#) lycus 2008-08-31

  Wow that Luna is something special, And actually she is a dream girlfriend as she will tell her boyfriend what is going on with out well the confusion that some girls love to inflict on their boyfriends. And now she has told Harry to explore his feelings for Hermione and it seems that she is willing to share, since she knows that Hermione will be in Harrys life and if she tried to force him to choose she would lose Harry. And as for Ron he is a spoild brat that needs to grow up and realise what he has insted of whining about what other people have. And that was great placing of your cliffe about snape in the middle of the chapter.

• Thoughts of Pudding

  (#) jabarber69 2008-09-01

  Hey I still think it should be Harry/Luna/Hermione in a threesome...this story is ripe for it and they would be perfect together!

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