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im sorry i never should have said them words
2 reviewshaley(aka hales) bryar is the younger sister of the famous drummer for mcr bob bryar,she hasnt seen him in 7 years what will happen when the finally see eachother again?
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im sorry i never should have said them words
(#) jcara 2008-09-03
I think if you fix your grammar, spelling, and punctuation, this could be a really great story. You should maybe look into a beta. They can help out a lot!im sorry i never should have said them words
(#) ChemicalEllen 2008-09-03
Hmmmm i like the way this story is heading. But your vocab could do with fixing a bit! Appart from that it's a good story line so update soon and don't keep me waiting!lol!
Luv
Ellrn
xoxox
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