(#) Give-emHellKid 2008-09-08i loved it!
I really liked the part at the end because it surprised me, i mean i didn't actually expect him to kill her, i thought he was just teasing her. I like when stories surprise me cos not alot do nowadays!
Author's responseAww thanks :)
I just realised it has loads of typos, I wrote it in like 5mins
Thanks for the review :)
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