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• The Untitled Story - Year 7 and Beyond

  (#) IrishChaos 2008-09-09

  Oh great here comes Osiris! Just imagine a Malfoy and a Goa'uld. How Camp!
  I just love these series! Please continue cause I had to laugh when you introduced Moody as a "Sports And Social". A "wizard" with a knife indeed!

• The Untitled Story - Year 7 and Beyond

  (#) peachesdpt 2008-09-10

  i love this story. It has a lot of potential, but some how i just don't think Harry would be this forth coming with the ancient database. Personally i had a little trouble with him inviting others besides the squibs to join them. Then i thought ok the muggles know more about science than wizards so i'll let that slide, but this is just to unbeliaveable for me. What is going to happen when they find the ancient city in antartica. I would think this would be a good way for them to get a place of their own without having to hide from others and a chance to find out about their own origins without having to share with others. Especially since their are out numbered and the muggles are more likely to kill them and steal their technology. But that could be just me.

  Author's response

  You're actually the first to notice this.
  
  Actually, I can get away with it because I haven't put out the details of the agreement they have with the Americans.
  
  As for the outpost in Antarctica, I had planned on having them discover it soon, and it won't be the Americans running it...

• The Untitled Story - Year 7 and Beyond

  (#) grey_shadow_horse 2008-11-06

  Hey :) I like this idea a lot! I always love a good hp:sg1 Crossover. This fic has a lot of good ideas, but it happens way to fast for me. Everything happens so fast it is difficult to follow. It has no dept because you don't flesh out your chapters. Is this an sequel to something?? Have I missed that? Because I don't understand where this Potter manor comes from. What happend with voldy? 6 & 7 didn't happen because Albus D is still alive. Harry and hermoine are 17 right? what happend in those between years? I can't see adults following and listening too a 17 year old, no matter that he found the ships first. You made him leader in a few words. I hope that you will write a bit more.
  This is not a flame!!! Please believe me when I say that I love this idea. But for my this is a draft, not a fic. It isn't finished.
  
  I hope that with later chapters you will explain things more.
  If you would explain what happend afther year5 ( mabye even as an author's note) That would help.

  Author's response

  Actually, I like it when I'm criticized, then I can make my writing better. It's infinitely more useful than "Nice chapter, please update."
  
  Yes, you missed year 6, and probably year 1 as well. Those are also posted on here. Reading year 6 would likely answer a lot of the questions you have. And I'm aware of the lack of detail and the unfinished state. I'll probably go back and rewrite all of these after I finish.
  
  Link for year 6 on Fanfiction.net is as follows, because this site is taking a day and an age to load today:
  
  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4329278/1/The_Untitled_Story_Year_6

• The Untitled Story - Year 7 and Beyond

  (#) peachesdpt 2009-03-11

  hi, just wanted to know when you will finish this story as it if very good & i can't wait until the next chapter is up!

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