(#) ThreeCheersForMCR_x 2008-09-09Man, I absolutly loved this chapter!
The whole Frerard concept is slowly unravelling as the story goes on. So much tension! But I like the way you are teasing us with it. ;)
Haha, it was cute when Gerard checked Frank out and when Frank had a spaz attack over the spider. I could so imagine him doing that (meaning Frank having a spaz attack over a spider. Though I could also see Gerard checking Frank out...) 'cos as you may know, he has a phobia of spiders in reality. I'm sure you knew that anyways.
OMFG I was pissing myself when Gerard attacked the mascot AKA Marcus. I just got wonderful visions of the 'I'm not okay' video. I love that shit. It was trés amusant. ;D
And I also loved how long it was. 12,000 effing words? That's about the length of some peoples stories.
Anyways, well done. I fuckin' loved it. You're a star. :)
(#) ferardxXxgerarnk_tc 2008-09-09i don't think i can thank you enough for updating :D i fucking LOOOVED IT
the consistent long chapters are like heaven
you always leave off the chapters with suspenese and it keeps me coming back and begging for more
the whole secret between mikey and frank, and now chris wanting to murder gerard, spiders, a shirtless frank, a confused gerard, mikey being the hilarious brother he is and alicia aaww it's all to good haha
just can't get enough of this story it's so good :)
- dude! that was so fucking amazing and long, which is not a bad thing....i love long updates
Oh My Gee....i cannot wait until November! it's going to be brilliant i just know it =)
haha its really funny how Gerard hasn't got the picture that Frankie likes him yet....but we all can be slow at times
the part that keeps replaying in my head is the spider incident....wow that was some funny shit with Frankie freaking out and tackling Gee and then taking his shirt off and catching Gerard checking him out....HILARIOUS!
yep, so u are like the bestest person ever and thank you so much for giving us this great-beyond-belief story....update whenever u can please!
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