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• The Bucket List

  (#) lostmymindxx45 2008-09-09

  Oooo Sounds interesting. You should totally go on!!!
  
  xo
  C-line

  Author's response

  Thank you :)
  
  I shall carry on
  
  Add me to your alerts ;)
  
  Dondon x

• The Bucket List

  (#) dtng101 2008-09-09

  I agree
  xD.
  Haha I berly found out it has one of my nicknames cool.
  xP.
  more soon
  xd

  Author's response

  Cool, and thanks for the review :)
  
  I will carry on
  
  Dondon x

• The Bucket List

  (#) Hoodiegirl86 2008-09-09

  PWNAGE LUV IT :)

  Author's response

  Why thank you :D

• The Bucket List

  (#) Julianne 2008-09-10

  Bleh. Interesting idea, but the writing could see some improvement.
  
  It doesn't quite seem to 'flow'. Chances are, you're either trying too hard or not enough. I'm inclined to think the latter.
  
  Watch punctuation and vocabulary- try to use some interesting words. Throw in a good adjective or adverb from time to time. Better yet, use them regularly. Modifiers are an author's best friends.

  Author's response

  Ermmm, thanks?
  
  It's not like I want a perfect story, just something people enjoy reading.
  
  But I will consider what you said anyway.

• The Bucket List

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-09-14

  Hi Dondon,
  
  I'm a little slow!!
  
  I love the premise of this. Looking forward to reading more.

  Author's response

  Hi!
  
  Its fine, I was so excited when I got your review. I was like yey Moonshyne is reading!
  
  This is a little side story while Im working on my other one
  
  Thanks for your review :)
  
  x

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