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• Thoughts of Pudding

  (#) Wonderbee31 2008-09-13

  A really fun part there. Enjoyed the chat Luna and Hermione had, as well as Hermione and he pleasure at being able to read Harry's work. Going to be curious as to what further role Fawkes will play, and what will happen when both girls start to talk with Harry and whether he'll go all noble on them and try to push them away.

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  (#) Wolfric 2008-09-13

  Great chapter. Poor Harry, two girls and a phoenix to confuse him. If Mrs. Weasley has his key, how did he access his vault? Thanks for writing. W.

  Author's response

  Griphook provided him with a new key.
  
  Brian

• Thoughts of Pudding

  (#) Vanir 2008-09-14

  Highly enjoyable. The girls´ conversation was very nice, and you do have a unique Luna. the Moody repartee was brilliant and i really liked the response to the paper Harry wrote. One Gringott's with many doors was a neat concept that I haven't seen before, although similar concepts has been written, and all in all, you're keeping it up in style.
  Thanks.
  
  Vanir

• Thoughts of Pudding

  (#) Vanir 2008-09-14

  Highly enjoyable. The girls´ conversation was very nice, and you do have a unique Luna. the Moody repartee was brilliant and i really liked the response to the paper Harry wrote. One Gringott's with many doors was a neat concept that I haven't seen before, although similar concepts has been written, and all in all, you're keeping it up in style.
  Thanks.
  
  Vanir

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  (#) Cateagle 2008-09-14

  I do like the way things are shaping up, both between Luna and Hermione and between the two grils and Harry; I suspect there's going to be some interesting social evolutions there before the summer is over. The discussion with Moody and the visit to Gringotts indicates that Harry is starting to come into his own and I suspect both girls will be helping this and both will be redefining their relationships with him, with each other, and with those outside their group before all return to Hogwarts.

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  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-09-14

  Very interesting update. It was a bit awkward the way Hermione and Luna handed out Harry's assignment as if he wasn't even there. Seemed a bit patronizing to me, even if they were proud.
  
  I also couldn't help but groan at the inevitable will readings. If you're trying to write a remotely realistic story, they're completely necessary...but I've read so many of them now...
  
  Looking forward to more.

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  (#) Copperhead 2008-09-14

  Fantastic. keep it up. Not the most useful review, but consider it a 'two thumbs up'

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  (#) issabissa 2008-09-15

  Another Delightful chapter!! Great job! Keep up the awesome work!!!!

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  (#) Cwejr 2008-09-16

  What an interesting story! Chaos theory implies just such a connection. It's interesting how a small change has global potential. I like the way you handled it. Very good.
  
  Hope you have lots more chapters planned......
  
  Looking forward to the next chapter.
  
  Thanks for sharing your story.

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  (#) simplesailor 2008-09-21

  I like this fic a lot. It is a well written and tastefully done story-line. I do wonder though, will the girls end up sharing Harry if he can't make up his mind between the two?

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