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Bite Me
(#) xoconverse 2008-09-13
hahaha I loved when Ray was like: what?! undone! lol it made me giggle.
ah i love this story!
please update soon! (:Bite Me
(#) YuleShootYourEyeOut 2008-09-13
nice Pirates reference, those movies are awesome!
update soon please! i love it!!Bite Me
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-09-13
asdfghjkl;
ACKK!
This story is AMAZING.
No lie.
I think I'm going to give you a hug.
-hug-
YAY!
Update soon!Bite Me
(#) queenofsarcasm 2008-09-13
Yeah that was pretty much amazing. I just read your whole story up to chapter 8 and I almost cried when I found out that was all that was posted. Not realy but it was a pretty intense moment. There are only two things I have trouble with in your story; 1) connencting names and people but after 8 chapters I pretty well got the hang of it so no worries and 2) language. profanity may not be a big deal to me but I definately can't let the parentals see if u know what I mean. So that's all for now. Update soon...like yesterday. Waiting sucks lol. Happy writing :)
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