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• Deadlines

  (#) moonpig 2008-09-27

  Great update, i'm really enjoying this story.
  
  I loved the banter once again, i really like the way you write Frank and how he interacts with everyone.
  
  Poor Gerard, the side story here is so intriguing. So good how you had Mikey being there for his brother.
  
  Hold a minute, i wasn't expecting the change with Bob and Jill (don't want to give anything away for those that haven't read it) Loved it especially Bob having to disappear to the bath room - ha ha

  Author's response

  Cheers moonpig, i'm so pleased you liked the update. It was really hard to write because i find it difficult writing about girlfriends etc without feeling guilty. I have Eliza as a bit of a bitch in this story but i'm sure she's a really nice person in real life. It's not based on her but my character just happens to have her name. Nobody sue me please.

• Deadlines

  (#) Dondon1827 2008-09-27

  Brilliant update as always :)
  
  This story has so much going on, Gerard's side of the story, Jill and Bob and I have the feeling there is something going on with Frank, not quite sure yet though.
  
  Loved it, especially Bob's embarrasing little encounter down below lol.
  
  Cant wait for an update =)
  
  Dondon x

  Author's response

  Thank you for taking the time to review.
  
  I do have storyline in mind for this but i get lots of additional things that just pop in and i can't help writing about the other guys.
  
  I'm so pleased you liked Bob's unfortunate mishap - he he i'm so cruel. I'm not confident writing that stuff at all so i'm glad you knew what i was talking about.

• Deadlines

  (#) cupcakeloserrainbow 2008-09-28

  Amazing as always! how do you do it? I swear i don't think i have ever been this in to a FF.
  
  I feel that the charters are just so real.
  
  you tell the story so well that i really feel that i'm Jill.

  Author's response

  Thank you so much and i really mean that. Your review has given me a huge lift in confidence. When you said you could see yourself as Jill, wow, i'm so happy.

• Deadlines

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-09-28

  Hey there Neve,
  
  I love how you write all the characters Even the littlest things like the rest leaving Mikey to hopefully help his brother. When Ray got his album he was so thankful and I could picture that. How excited was Gee to get the Misfits album, it was just so cute.
  
  I love how in the story you have this nice little side story with Gee and Eliza. The great thing about it is that's what it is a side story. I've read storied and the side story takes over the main story and you're like what happened to the main characters. And it happens so much to Bob stories, all of the sudden they become Gee stories. Bob becomes window dressing. These two characters are at the forefront and are what is drving the story. I love it.
  
  Now the story itself.
  
  I love the interaction between Frank and Bob in the car it's too funny and I can totally see it happening, poor Mikey stuck between their antics.
  
  Poor Gee having to talk on the phone with Eliza for over an hour and it sounded heated.
  
  What can I say about the hotel scene between Bob and Jill, it was exciting to see them getting closer.
  
  Poor Bob though, but it so fits in as to what is going on and the pace of their relationship. It was sweet how he didn't want to take advantage of the situation knowing that she had a tough day.
  
  My only complaint is that it was too short!! I could spend hours reading this story.
  
  I'm only kidding the length was great and as always a great and sweet ending.
  
  Looking forward to the next update.
  
  

  Author's response

  Moonshyne - thank you so much for your amazing review and for taking the time to write it.
  
  Did you notice i kinda never mentioned the album Ray got? For the life of me i couldn't think of one he would love - how bad is that? I was going to research it and i forgot - shame on me.
  
  Thank you for the side story bit. This is definately a Bob story and will focus on him as the main character (Yeah go Bob) but the others are key to it. It will at times focus on events with other characters but it will be from the point of view of either Jill or Bob. I kinda know where i want to go but it depends if people still enjoy the story.
  
  Yippee - i really enjoyed writing the car scene and Bob practically snapping Frank in two. I agree - poor Mikey he he.
  
  The Gee and Eliza relationship is important to the story and Jamia will also come into it. No Frank without his Jamia :) Also Justin and Ruth.
  
  I know, i know this was a really short update, well in relation to my usual ones. Thank you again, it really means alot and i love your reviews. :)

• Deadlines

  (#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-09-28

  oh great update!
  
  haha poor Bob at the end! but what a sweetie, always thinking of Jill first. that's so lovely.
  
  poor Gerard, he plays the tortured soul so well bless him! i'm interested as to where that leads.
  
  i am also loving Frank! well what's not to love with Frankie! very concerned about Gerard, so is that just pure friendship or something else?
  
  anyway i love this! thanks so much for updating!

  Author's response

  My chapter has gone green - That's totally awesome.
  
  I hope i have made Jill and Bob believable and i really appreciate your reviews. I can't help but write Gerard kinda tortured and taking things to his heart.
  
  I'm so pleased you like the way i write Frank. I love Frankie so it's a huge compliment. Frank is very protective of Gerard but it's a brotherly friendship.

• Deadlines

  (#) Julianne 2008-09-28

  Wonderful, as always.
  
  I like how you're keeping this somewhat chaste here- while you can see there's a potentially great relationship between Jill and Bob, it's not all-out smut. So kudos for having enough taste to avoid that.
  
  I noticed you didn't mention what Ray got- I'm guessing it might be because you don't know what he would like, seeing how you try to keep the characters as close to their real counterparts as possible. So, if my theory is correct, Ray listens to The Killers, Muse... and that's all I can remember from a Fuse interview I saw on YouTube.
  
  Nods

  Author's response

  Hi Julianne
  
  Thanks for taking the time to review. Also thanks for the tips with Ray's fav music, i will definately remember for the future.
  
  I couldn't write smut if i tried (i'd have everyone laughing at my poor attempt) so i know people might think this lacks something but like you said others might prefer it this way. Not to say it will be dull because i promise you it won't be.
  
  Thanks for being so kind and i'm so pleased you are enjoying it :)

• Deadlines

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-09-28

  Hi there Neve,
  
  For Ray it's IRON MAIDEN all the way!!! That is his all time favorites and I believe it is one of the reasons why he and Gerard hit off so well. They both liked Iron Maiden.

  Author's response

  Thank you so much, i am so damn i should have known that but i took a mental block and then posted without going and sorting it. I will add it in if i can. mm potential scene just popped in my head and i will dedicate it to you :)

• Deadlines

  (#) cutegirl12356 2008-09-29

  lol...we all know what he went to do....haha....lol...I loved it...MORE!

  Author's response

  Thanks for the review and i'm glad you liked it

• Deadlines

  (#) disturbedangel6 2008-09-29

  Don't have sex!!!
  He's gonnnna go away!!!
  Nooooooooo
  So cute hahha
  Update soonxx

  Author's response

  he he, i'm evil.
  only 2 days to go

• Deadlines

  (#) Medusa 2008-09-30

  I'm really glad you updated and I love it even more the banter between everyone is amazing :D
  
  They should have one "special" night together before he goes home orrrrrrrr jill should just got with them :D:D
  
  Cant wait for more :D:D
  

  Author's response

  Hi Medusa, thank you so much for review and i'm so happy you like the banter.
  
  I'm nearly finished the next update :)

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