(#) sparky40sw 2008-10-02Excellent chapter - you perform the miracle of making one of the villains of the 5th and 6th books a true hero, give the appropriate backstory for RAB.
Overall wonderful, except Harry being silly about being with Hermione and giving Ron the lesson in love that he really needs.
thanks so much for sharing
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-10-02Re-read this again, and do have to say, a very different thing for Regulus there than you usually see. Also enjoyed the interaction between Hermione and Harry there, and wonder what this will do to things as the changes go on from here?
- Excellent!! I do love the background you gave Regulus and you've done a magnificent job of redeeming him. The interaction between Harry & Hermione was quite in character for both of them and I suspect life to be "lively" when they tell Ron that they're together. 'Twill be interesting to watch how the changes propegate as the story continues.
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-10-22Very good update, I enjoyed it immensely. Your take on Penseives was very different than my own. I don't think they should be affected by any of their surroundings in the memory, but that may just be me.
It was sadly realistic for Harry and Hermione to put there relationship on hold for Ron. I can only hope that it doesn't last much longer. He clearly isn't investing the same level of commitment as they are, if his bursting in on them suspiciously was any indicator.
Looking forward to more.
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